SOme feedback would be nice!

Have you seen this Dr Pepper commercial? I didn't realize that was a breed until I read this brief!
www.youtube.com/watch?v=WegzlLehL5o

Cheers,
Jane

Do you or will you have a tag line or slogan?

Yes, I've seen the video, it's nice :)
We might have a tagline as "outsourcing solutions"
Please note that 4 of your drawing is too squared. We would like something more round/colorful.
Thanks

Hello, Would you be so kind as to provide feedback on my idea(s)? And let me know if you'd like any revisions -- thank you! Jane

Hello,
We would like to avoid photos, only drawings.
Thank you

Good Afternoon,

Regarding the invitation to participate on this project, please consider giving some feedback relating Design #5948337,
Also invite you to feel free to communicate any changes you might require.

Kind Regards,
Francisco Augusto

Hi Francisco,
I really do like your design. It's simple and nice, it's part of the top3

does it have to be komodor breed based idea or you are also looking for sth totally different/ abstract as well?

No, it can be something totally different and abstract.