Feedback please.

We uploaded two samples of logos we like. The idea is to have a small detail in the typography that shows that "punchline" is a fun, quirky brand. In the case of the logo of "make" the m is edited, and in the case of "equilibrium" by having the i slanted it tells a little joke. It's not that balanced any more. Maybe flipping, turning or modifying a letter in "punchline" will help. Remember what punchline means: The final phrase or sentence of a joke or story, providing the humor or some other crucial element.

Thanks for your invitation.
I have submitted couple of concepts.
Please check.

Regards.

We'll take a look. Thanks!