Hi feedback please

hello, hope for a comment

Don't know if anyone got the update, but I screwed up the brief. The client only wanted to see jazzed up and improved versions of their existing logo. All they had was that photo of a watermark and needed it all fixed up. Does anyone want to update their submissions?

Completely different direction. I need the very best rendering of the sample logo provided in the brief. Thanks.

First place is gone, but second place is still up for grabs. Please see revised brief.