Hi I submitted concepts for you would gladly have some feedback so that I know if I'm on the right track.

Regards,
RM

The color scheme is too aggressive, SS as letters outright should not appear, more visually flowing.

Hello Sir,

Thank you for the invitation. I have to send you the draft ASAP

Regards,
Ghouri

Hi

And tanks for inviting me. I have submitted 3 designs and i'll be pleased if you will take the time to give feed back.
cheers

Jano

hi
Sorry i only submit 1 design.

cheers
Jano