please leave feedback and let me know ... if I'm on right track or not? Thank You Ron

can you provide some logo that you like?

Dear Sit or Madam,

Would you please provide some feedback on my design, happy to make revision.
If you don't like my logo, Even elimination is ok.

Thank you

Hello,

Could you give us a feedback please?
Thanks!

Regards,
Rafael, Bolshoi Creations Freelancer