any feedback?

Hello

Thanks a lot for inviting me for this project, soon i will submit my creative ideas for your project


Thanks

Hello

As per your brief i had submitted design, please give your precious feedback for submitted design, as still we are working on your project, so if you have any specific requirement please let us know so we can incorporate on rest of design on which we are working for you.

Thanks and awaiting for your valuable feedback

Thank you very much for the stars, is there anything that you would like me to change to make it better?

i dont understand whit winner same concept with mine?