check the revised design please

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I have added more detail to my brief based on the submissions I have been provided, please read as it will help better understand what I am looking for:
My project must include a graphic, in additional to type, that communicates an emerging, progressive movement. Preferably a sphere. THE SPHERE SHOULD APPEAR 3D. I also am open to progression of spheres that growth and demonstrate movement and speed by changing the shape. A sphere that abstractly represents people growing and increasing is speed is ideal. VITAL CORE should be in a Sans Serif Font preferable with whisps or tails in some of the letters.

please check my submit sir, i need your correct to make better logos

best regard

Sir any feedback ?

Revised design submitted!

I updated my brief with more detail and some uploads that will help provide better direction on what I am looking for. Thank you.

Please do not use bar graphs or revenue arrows to show growth as these elements make a design very hard to trademark.

Hello

As per your brief i had submitted design, please give your precious feedback for submitted design, as still we are working on your project, so if you have any specific requirement please let us know so we can incorporate on rest of design on which we are working for you.

Thanks and awaiting for your valuable feedback

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