Hi Ben,

Thanks for the invitation. However, I've submitted a design just before you sent me this invitation. It would very much interest to hear your thought about the design. If it doesn't suit your favor then maybe we can work out another version.

Would like to hear from you soon.

Thank you,
g

Hello.
Would you like to give me some feedback?
Thanks.

http://www.crowdspring.com/help/faq/overused-overdone-logo-design-concepts/