did you check my latst designs ? what do you think ?please help me to improve your logo

Hello,
unfortunately I do not accept unpaid invitations. I accept only paid invitations. If you want to invite me let's pay small amount and I can work whole project.

Thanks,
Kamran Sadikhov,
www.ks99.us

Design id #15331372. Hope some feedback

a new revision has been added. please rate or reject ,

thx