please check my entry and provided feedback

A great tag line is very important

Sir, if my design there are less and not as you wish, please do not hesitate to give feedback and revisions to me, I will do what is best for you and I will do as soon as possible, thankyou

It seems like the vast majority of designers just took stock art and did not use much of their own creativity.

Funny you say that , because the one you've chosen looks like stock art as well