feedback please..

Please give me some suggestions and feedback so that I can improve my design ? If you have something else in mind help me and write me that so I can come up with complete new versions . Please check my portfolio and profile and see what I can do for you .

not much time left but thanks mate for the invite - i will see what i can do
Cheers

Hello,

Can you please check my design options and let me know your valuable feedback.I really want to know that I am on the right track or not.I'm always ready to deliver you unlimited revisions until your satisfaction.
Looking forward for your response.

Thanks & Regards,