please check my new design "" #15076622 "" "" #15076554 "" "" #15076431 "" and leave some feedback if i'm going in the right direction.

thank you
SJ

Thanks for the efforts of everyone - I appreciate your creativity and work. I have updated the brief to try and bring a little more clarity to my thoughts of the logo. Please review and submit revised logos. Thanks so much.

Feedback please.

The kerning is off and the weight of the "O" doesn't match the rest...

Thanks for the feedback. I'll have it adjusted in the finalisation process. I'm not a designer - just know what I like :)