Please give me some suggestions and feedbacks so that I can improve my design.

hello sir,,please check my desaign (#15368133), i hope your feedback,
thank's sir.

Thank you Melody for your design submission. It is really cute. Maybe try another color scheme or font style. Thank you again .

Thanks a lot or your feedback. I hope you have liked some of our latest submissions. Wish to receive some feedback so that I can make changes and you select my design.
Thanks.

design id #15436924 Hope some feedback