feedback please

Hi, I have read your brief and submitted a new design. Your feedback very important to improve the design, Please check and let me know what do you think.
Best regards

Please check my design and please send me some comments / feedback / suggestions . Please help me to build your perfect Brand logo. I am waiting for your reply. Thanks

Hello,

I'm looking forward to your feedback for my submission #17379721
Any suggestions would be helpful in finding the perfect design for you.

Best wishes,
Letitia

I applied all the changes that you asked for, hit me with your feedback, please.

any feedback please on my design #17381049