Feedback please.

Hi there,

I have submitted an initial concept. I'd love to hear your thoughts, feedback would be much appreciated before developing the design and submitting additional work.

Kindest Regards

Kevin

Hello

Using this logo sample
https://www.dropbox.com/s/8meenynpq2eowv0/IMG_2832.JPG?dl=0

The outer rim of this is the "cup"

Instead of Organic --> Kindness in a cup
Instead of Hummus and symbol--> Smoke coming from coffee

Instead of Hope--> KIND

Instead of original recipe--> Coffee Smoothies Bites

Instead of spread good things --> 100% of proceeds go to charity

Middle banner behind KIND- plain as is and one with some type of arrow or movement as to
"share kindness"

Hi Kevin

Using this logo sample
https://www.dropbox.com/s/8meenynpq2eowv0/IMG_2832.JPG?dl=0

The outer rim of this is the "cup"

Instead of Organic --> Kindness in a cup
Instead of Hummus and symbol--> Smoke coming from coffee

Instead of Hope--> KIND

Instead of original recipe--> Coffee Smoothies Bites

Instead of spread good things --> 100% of proceeds go to charity

Middle banner behind KIND- plain as is and one with some type of arrow or movement as to
"share kindness"

Hello

Using this logo sample
https://www.dropbox.com/s/8meenynpq2eowv0/IMG_2832.JPG?dl=0

The outer rim of this is the "cup"

Instead of Organic --> Kindness in a cup
Instead of Hummus and symbol--> Smoke coming from coffee

Instead of Hope--> KIND

Instead of original recipe--> Coffee Smoothies Bites

Instead of spread good things --> 100% of proceeds go to charity

Middle banner behind KIND- plain as is and one with some type of arrow or movement as to
"share kindness"

Hi there,

I have submitted a revised design in line with your feedback, any comments would be much appreciated to develop further.

Please private message any feedback.

Many thanks,

Kindest Regards

Kevin

hello feedback please....