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Thanks for your work! Please allow much more playfulness to flow in and make the logo more detailed. A young target group is addressed. Let yourself be inspired by these two designs that I recently uploaded

Thanks for your work! Please allow much more playfulness to flow in and make the logo more detailed. A young target group is addressed. Let yourself be inspired by these two designs that I recently uploaded

Thanks for your work! Please allow much more playfulness to flow in and make the logo more detailed. A young target group is addressed. Let yourself be inspired by these two designs that I recently uploaded

read this again:
If this is not at all the direction you were looking for,
just eliminate this design. Please avoid leaving star ratings,
lower than 4, in this case as star ratings are about designers,
and finished designs rather than drafts and suggestions.

don't spoil the rating of designers, they spend their time to make your logo

feedback pls on design #18183751