feedback please , design #19015663 and #19015664 ,regards

Thanks for your swift response sweet dreams. They're nice, but the symbol is too yin/yang. Want to keep away from anything sewage/hippie. The word is pseudo Japanese, yes, but would like to keep to cool colours to reflect the function of the garment to protect from the sun.
Cheers
Amanda

sorry, that was not meant to sewage! I meant new age.

sir here is the platform to give feedback , sir you send feedback on my design , i will try my level best ,regards

feedback please