FEEDBACK PLEASE #19166851 AND #19166852 REGARDS

Hi, Kindly provide your feedback on my design

Hello,

Could you possibly take a look on my entry and give me some feedback ?
this is my entry #19170587
Thank you for your consideration.

Best regards,
symbolman

#19187145 , #19187146 , Please Check. Ask for more modification if I'm on right track. Thanks.

please check my new design

One star and no feedback.
Are you aware of the penalty system that damages designer's ranking when this happens?