feedback please

please feedback, #19239819 thank you

If this is not at all the direction you were looking for,
just eliminate this design. Please avoid leaving star ratings,
lower than 4, in this case as star ratings are about designers,
and finished designs rather than drafts and suggestions.

Don't spoil the rating of designers, they spend their time to make your logo...

Hi, I have submitted a logo, looking forward to your feedback for my submission.

Any suggestions would be helpful in finding the perfect design for you.
Thanks.