feedback please , design #19239246 and #19239247 ,regards

Hello ingiAsuddin,

Thanks for submitting the design. Nice! However, as per the brief, we would prefer the words to be the logo rather than having the logo as an additional thing. .e. best without the circle and tick about the words in our case. Cheers Cameron

Hi there,
I've submitted some design proposals for your logo design according to your brief.
If you need any further assistance, customization or adjustments on the design, please don’t hesitate to contact me.
Mock-ups shown on this preview are used for presentation purposes only.
Please take a moment to provide feedback on the designs I've submitted.
Cheers and Thanks,
Slant Line Media

any feedback?