Please what was the update? Any feedback on my design? Please that helps

The only updates I've made to my brief were adding the suggestion to use the calgary skyline instead of a mountain range. I am open to both - but figure the skyline may tie into the industry/type of business better than the mountains.

Oh I see. I had used the mountains. I'll make amends. But apart from that is my style of design something you're looking for?

#19338768 , Please Check. Provide feedback if I'm on right track. Thanks.

please check my entry #19317464
Thank you