Hello Project Owner,
I've submitted some design proposals for your logo design according to your brief.
Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track and If you're looking for different designs, please let me know if you need any changes.
Possible comment on my design would be much appreciated.
Thanks & regards,
Slant Line Media

I just submitted my design for your review please.

Thank you.

Regards
Dreamsucht

Dear sir
please see my updated design & kindly provide your feedback..
Thank you..

Feedback would've been nice.