feedback please design #20527064 and #20527065 , thanks

Update revised design as per your updates brief. Feedback Please

feedback please

Hello contest holder,

I have uploaded my design #20528678 as per your given brief. Have you checked my design yet?

Please give me some suggestions and feedbacks so that I can improve my design . Your feedbacks are extremely valuable for me to get the best designs for your brand.If you have something else in mind to help me then please write me so that I can come up with something which you like the most . Hope to receive a feedback from you asap so that I can get an opportunity to work with you.

With regards,
Melody's Creation.

Hello
If the design is not what you are looking for, please avoid leaving a star rating less than 3 and simply eliminate the design. Low star ratings have a bad impact on the designers that worked hard to provide you with their logo versions.
Thanks and Best regards.

Hi
Kindly remove 1 star rating :) eliminate the design if you dont understand it.
it effects the whole Product rating and which is let me tell you is really hard to achieve.

Have a nice day.
Thanks!