(#20606637) Please Feedback on my Design. Thank you so much

Hi, Feedback Design(#20606693), please.

please check my design #20610267 and #20610268, regards

feedback please (#20613092)

check my design and let me know if you have any feedback

Hello contest holder,

I have uploaded my design #20614144 as per your given brief. Have you checked my design yet?
Please give me some suggestions and feedbacks so that I can improve my design . Your feedbacks are extremely valuable for me to get the best designs for your brand.If you have something else in mind to help me then please write me so that I can come up with something which you like the most . Hope to receive a feedback from you asap so that I can get an opportunity to work with you.

With regards,
Melody's Creation.