Hi CH,
Can you give me a rough content outline for the email newsletter. That will be great help to design.
Thanks

Hi,

I have sent some concepts and would really appreciate if you could review and leave your detailed feedback.

Thank you,

Raymond

Hi,

Could you please review my submissions and leave your detailed feedback.

Thank you,

Raymond

hi CH
looking forward to your feedback for any changes if possible.
many thanks

Please review or comment on my design so that I can modify and give another better design.

Please tell you want entire contents on email letter that attachment files have.