Please check my design #21552152,, Thank you

also design id#21552921

Hi,
In line with your brief, I carefully designed you some Logo samples and just submitted them with numbers; (#21572862) & #21572863) for your perusal. I look forward to see your feedback. Thanks

I have uploaded my design #21557449 as per your given brief. Have you checked my design yet?
Please give me some suggestions and feedbacks so that I can improve my design . Your feedbacks are extremely valuable for me to get the best designs for your brand.If you have something else in mind to help me then please write me so that I can come up with something which you like the most . Hope to receive a feedback from you asap so that I can get an opportunity to work with you.

hello dear!
please feedback to revision of something
thx ;)