Do you need the tagline as well?
And is it ok if the capital letters are used?

Hi there! I just submitted my entry today and carefully crafted my submission, Kindly check design (#21690253), (#21690252) and (#21690251). I look forward to see your feedback. Thanks!

feedback please...

Kindly provide your feedback on my entry work, thanks

Feedback pls.

looks like Autodesk logo