Possible feedback on my entry would be muchly appreciated.
Thanks.

Hi there,
I posted my design according to brief.please review that and let me know.

Regards.

I have just updated the brief with more description to help anyone that wants to re-enter their designs. So far designs have been close to what we want but this brief should shine a light on what has been missing that only after looking through the submission we have discovered.

Give me a feedback of my design please

looks like primary colors.