Please feedback so I know how I'm doing

I have just submitted a few variations of your logo. I'd love to know if this is the direction you want to go or you may want some changes. Thank you.

Dear Sir,

I submitted a logo for your brief (#22971659), pls check how is my design...

Thanking you.

Dear Sir/s

I just submitted new clear logo #22978265 for your info., Pls check
thanking you.

Feedback please

Dear Sir/Madam,

Kindly give a feed back on my work. It's really need to rectify my mistake and improve my design in feature thank you :)