Hey, what's wrong with my design? I thought i am on a right track.
You could tell me what to change or adjust...
I do not understand.

What you drew is very good. It Just is not correct yet. I would like to give you more details and see what we can come up with. You made all the changes I had asked for. Here are a few more details to help.
Pete was an old man, over weight who only had 4 teeth and they stuck out. He was was a dog who's life was very hard. He only had 1/4 of his bottom jaw. That's why his tongue always hung out of his mouth. So the dog you drew is to young he is very cute and made me laugh. If you could work on the mouth and tongue and fatten him up with skinny legs. Also right now I am just wanting to concentrate on the dog and not so much on the writing. I do love the way you wrote spicy with the pepper being the letter "I" was very clever. I hope this helps and I look forward to seeing what you come up with. Pete was a real individual.
Thanks,
Lisa

Did you get my updated response & information?
Lisa

Yes, got it! Will need some time to make required changes.