please view and feedback on the design no #23134443 and no #23134437 it will help me learn and improve thankyou

Hello,
Possible feedback on my design would be muchly appreciated.
Thanks.

feedback pls

feedback pls

Greetings!
Please review (#23138092).
Thank you.

Rating Guide: If you like any design rate it between 3-5 stars, otherwise just 'eliminate' it. Rating 1-2 stars severely impact the designer profile and hence limits to contribute more submissions to contest. Thanks for understanding.

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Hello, please check and rate my designs. Thanks (#23163709)

We have reviewed everyone's designs so far, firstly we have to say we are very impressed at the quality of designs submitted! a lot of credit to you all for your effort! To give you all an idea of how challenging it has been, we initially short listed to 20, then to 5, now we are at 2. A decision will be finalised shortly.