Hello there,
I just submitted my design thought according to your brief. Please review my design and let me know if I am on the right track and no low star ratings 5-star rating will be appreciated for my efforts, please.

Possible feedback on my entry would be muchly appreciated.
Thanks. 

hello sir,
please check and feedback please on my design, #23444726, #23444727, #23444728..

thanks and regards.