hello sir,
please check and feedback please on my design, #23692469, #23692470, #23692471, #23692472..
Rating Guide: If you like any design rate it between 3-5 stars, otherwise just 'eliminate' it. Rating 1-2 stars severely impact the designer profile and hence limits to contribute more submissions to contest. Thanks for understanding.
thanks and regards.

Possible feedback on my entry would be much appreciated.
Thanks.