Sir please Check #23922994 #23922992 #23922993 new designs

hello sir,
please check and feedback please on my design, #23926209, #23926210, #23926211, #23926212..
Rating Guide: If you like any design rate it between 3-5 stars, otherwise just 'eliminate' it. Rating 1-2 stars severely impact the designer profile and hence limits to contribute more submissions to contest. Thanks for understanding.
thanks and regards.

There you go, please check the revision.