feedback please .............

hello sir,
please check and feedback please on my design, #23979006, #23979007, #23979008..
Rating Guide: If you like any design rate it between 3-5 stars, otherwise just 'eliminate' it. Rating 1-2 stars severely impact the designer profile and hence limits to contribute more submissions to contest. Thanks for understanding.
thanks and regards.

sir, please check my entry #23982499 #23982500 #23982501 #23982502

feedback please ...............