very hopefully waiting for your valuable feedback on my creation design 24420441 ,24420442 and 24420443 , thanks

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Design #24423398
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Hello Project Owner,
Greetings!

Please provide your valuable feedback as well as encouraging ratings on my submitted Designs

Please check and Feedback please on my design, (#24435825), (#24435821) Rating Guide: If you like any design rate it between 3-5 stars, otherwise just 'eliminate' it. Rating 1-2 stars severely impact the designer profile and hence limits to contribute more submissions to contest. Thanks for understanding.

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