feedback please!

Please your feedback for design #24459081

Hi Amy, please check my entries.. thank you. Your feesback is much appreciated .
#24479011 and #24479010

Hello there,
I just submitted my design thought according to your brief.Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track. If you don't like my design, please eliminate those rather than giving 1 or 2 star rating.

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