#24659011 Please Check my Design and Feedback

Possible feedback on my entry would be much appreciated.
thanks.

please feedback on my three options
#24659352
#24659351
#24659350
Best Regards
Mahmoud

Dear Project Owner,

I have submitted my designs.
I know you are busy but, would you mind to give me your feedback?
Please tell me if I am on the right track.

Best regards!
Coco

sir,
please feedback my design.
Thank you

#24674473

Something feedback and rate for this will be nice. Thanks!

Hi There,

I have submitted my designs and I really appreciate if you can provide me a feedback.

Thank You.

#24686133 please sir feedback

I just submitted my design thought according to your brief.Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track.
If you don't like this design, leave it with ZERO stars.
Or eliminate it without stars. Low 1 and 2 star ratings downgrade the designer's personal
rating and he has no motivation to come up with new ideas. Thank you for your understanding

Design ID - #24686347

Hi,
Provide me feedback to this id #24686678, I know difficult to pick 1 design of 600 more great design, but I think Your'e gonna pick the best for your business. Good luck.
regards
PRIN