please check my design #24871233 feedback please ......

Thanks for the rate, any feedback or changes on my design?? Thanks.

Hello,
I am glad to participate in your project.
A proper feedback in this kind of work is curcial, so if it is possible I count on yours for the following submissions;

#24926691 #24926719

If you don´t like any of those approaches just comment and eliminate, because low rating is not fair for our kind of work and downs our global rating. Thanks!

Best regards,