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I AM CURRENTLY REVIEWING EVERYONE'S SUBMITTED DESIGNS, AND HAVE ONE GENERAL UPDATE FOR THE ICON DESIGN. I AM INTERESTED IN SEEING SOME ICON DESIGNS THAT INCORPORATE A PELICAN IN THE FORM OF ANIMAL GEOMETRIC LINE ART AND/OR ABSTRACT LINE ART. I WILL UPLOAD SOME GENERAL IMAGES OF THE CONCEPT AS A REFERENCE POINT TO GET IDEAS FROM. SO FAR EVERYONE'S DESIGNS HAVE BEEN OUTSTANDING. THIS WILL HELP ME DECIDE, WHICH ONE TO CHOOSE. THANK YOU!

Hi
Thanks for the invite to this project
Please do check the design submission (#25020340) and share your valuable feedback with me.
If you have any suggestion or wish to make any sort of changes then comment that also.
I hope that you will like my design
Thank You
Arun

Hi
Please check the design submission (#25020340).
I made this design as per the design brief. I hope that you will like the design work and if you wish to make any changes, then comment that also.
Thank You