feedback please on design 25333104 and 25333105 , thanks

Hi, I submitted an entry please review design (#25333295) and (#25333296) hope to hear your feedback. Thank you!

Hello there,
I just submitted my design thought according to your brief.Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track.

If you don't like my design, please eliminate those rather than giving low star rating.

Best.

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