Hi! I submitted an entry, please review design (#25384082) and hope to hear your feedback. Thank you!

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(#25385048)
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Rating Guide: If you like any design rate it between 3-5 stars, otherwise just 'eliminate' it. Rating 1-2 stars severely impact the designer profile and hence limits to contribute more submissions to contest. Thanks for understanding.

Also Another Version.
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Hi, I just submitted the revision please check design (#25387778) and hope to hearing you again. thanks