feedback please on design 25672243 and 25672244 , regards

hello dear Project Owner,

I have submitted my design having design no.#25672324 Please share your feedback on that, it will help me know if i am moving in the right direction. If you would like any changes in the design feel free to say that .regards.

Hello,
Please check my concept and Feedback please on my designs, #25673141, #25673142..
If you don't Like My Design so please remove the one-star and then eliminate it.
But don't give the one or two stars. It's bad for all designers so please. Remove the Star I appreciate you if you remove.
Thanks and regards.

I have submitted a design. Please give your feedback for the design because it will help my future work. Thanks!