Please provide feedback on my design..

I like the concepts of the idea with the writing but am looking to add some form of logo as well to the design not just words, something which infers “Putting you, the client, firmly at the centre of everything we do, to enable us to run a genuinely approachable, caring focused planning service”.

I like the concepts of the idea with the writing but am looking to add some form of logo as well to the design not just words, something which infers “Putting you, the client, firmly at the centre of everything we do, to enable us to run a genuinely approachable, caring focused planning service”.

Possible feedback on my entry would be much appreciated.
thanks. 

feedback on my designs, please.
And if you don't like any design just eliminate it without giving any star rating because it affects a designer's overall ranking.
hope you'll understand.

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