feedback please!

submission #26374030

would you check my entry (#26384821) ? Please do not rating low star if you find the design is not on your product line. simply Eliminate.

This seems like an overly simple project. No changes to the logo, add flavour line and a check box for the roast. Am I missing something?

Nope :). Unless you come up with something very cool and new

Bleed-through - Using the color of the label (in this case, Chrome BOPP), as part of the label. This would not be printed, per se, but still is part of the logo. My initial thought is instead of printing "white" in our logo, it would be Chrome, from the actual lable.

https://www.lightninglabels.com/cl/documents/WhiteLayerGuide2016.pdf

I use stars, compared to other designs. It is only used for comparison reasons

HI,
Please increase the time frame