feedback please on design #26539646, #26539647 thanks

I have updated my brief to what I’m requiring. Sorry I didn’t realise I had missed this part out!

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Sorry there is now Al

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Sir
I submitted my design and hope you like it and give me 4/5 star ratting but If you don’t like my entries kindly left me without star instant of low star(1/2/3).
Because I spend a lot of time for your design.

Feedback please.