Sir,

feedback please sir (#27206454) design.
i hope you will select my design as a winner.
please review my design

thank you,

Thanks for designs.
I only need a few lines for Next Appointment so it doesn't need to take up entire side of card. See attachment in brief
Also, I'm not keen on dark colours
Some of them look 'too busy' so I'm going to take out some of the content. See attachment in brie