I have submitted a design. Please take a look on it and let me know your feedback.

I actually think your design is brilliant, especially the mic/cross concept. However, its not what im looking for. It looks too "cool." lol. I know thats weird. Im looking for something that reminds of a comic book (font color, etc) but is still a simple logo of words....maybe inside a comic book word bubble?

please give me feedback so i can improve my design as you want..