Possible feedback on my entry would be much-appreciated Thanks

Hi,

I have submitted my design having design no (#27503228) & (#27503227) Please share your feedback on that, it will help me know if I am moving in the right direction. If you would like any changes in the design feel free to say that .

Thanks & regards.

(If you don't like this design, please leave it with ZERO stars. Or eliminate it without stars. Low 1 ,2 and 3 star ratings downgrade the designer's personal rating and he has no motivation to come up with new ideas.
Thank you for your understanding)

Check out my all design, I hope your like it. I have created logos for many big companies and I have highlighted the important issues of your company through my logo and if you want to see any changes tell me I will show you the changes. Thank you

Feedback, please!