DesId #27593943 please give me your feedback

DesId #27594026 please give me your feedback

Hello, I am a new designer on this platform please check my design #27595341 and if you like it then please provide feedback it worth a lot to me as it will help me to develop my profile fast.
THANKS

Thank you very much. I think that we will need something a little more dark / scary (just a bit scary), and also not quite so focused on the Pest Control Officer - the person. Thank you very much for the designs

still, i am working on your project so don't close before deadline

Hello,

I have sent some designs, please check them and if you have any changes please let me know. and send some feedback because after your feedback only we can understand our design right or wrong and it's helping to send more submission

thanks for the wonderful opportunity
regards
logan

you said you don't want to focus on the PERSON
of the officer. But this text seems to call for it...
do not you think?:

''Josh found a good job which he enjoyed. He never intended to give it up. But then something he never expected happened …''

Looks like the main actor of the plot...

Hello Thomas.

Thanks for the invitation.
I submitted an entry.
feedback would be much appreciated .

Thanks.